Ice Flower Knight ss2

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1. Zyan_Topaz

   I like this series very much and I hope you’ll continue it. However, a deterrent for many people to continue reading might be the terrible English being used. Unfortunately, for us who know the language fluently, it disturbs the flow of the story if the wrong verb tenses are used, or if interjections don’t match the mood, or if the vocabulary don’t match the pictures.

   For instance, in Ch 53, ‘heating room’ is used for a green house, or plant observatory, if that title suits you better. But a heating room is a room that provides heat. I imagined a boiler so when I saw the Prince watering plants, it made me stop reading and write this instead.

   Another error is: “What a guy that specializes in making people feel annoying.” Annoying is outward, the effect one has on people, while annoyed is inward, how one feels by being annoyed. North are adjectives but used differently.

   Better: “What a guy, specializing in annoying people.” Or “What a guy who specializes in making people feel annoyed.” Or “What a guy! He’s so good at annoying people.“

   03/03/2023 at 7:51 am

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   1. Zyan_Topaz

      Typo: “ North are adjectives but used differently.” should be: “Both are adjectives but used differently.”

      03/03/2023 at 7:53 am

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      1. Zyan_Topaz

         “Please don’t think of me like that.” Is the guide the Prince? Use the correct pronouns!

         03/03/2023 at 7:56 am

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         1. manhwateen

            Thank you, we will fix it soon

            03/03/2023 at 10:01 am

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